Peer Review: letter to Hannah

Hannah:
Your letter to the editor talked about the “Clean Energy Progress Fund”, how this fund will affect the environment we are living right now, if the funds cannot be collected in time, we will lose a lot of the world’s great wonders.
According to your writing, the main claim is that we should have our “Colorado Clean Energy Progress Fund” collected in time before our living environment has more damages.
This piece of writing has used appeals of logo and pathos. The examples: warming temperatures, the contamination of water and so on support that if we don’t do what we can do, the world will lose its beauty. And talking about the fact that the pine forest will be dead in three to five years makes the appeals stronger.
It is only a three dollar fund, it makes me think of how much money we use every day for food or anything else, three dollar is nothing to most of the people, you made a very good connection here with the readers. It would be nice if you can put another environmental damage that has already happened, I think it is easier for some of us to remember what has already happened than imagine what will happen in the futures.


Sean Hu