Peer Review: letter to Sam

Sam:
In the writing you talked about yourself as a well experienced snow boarder and skier, and how you don’t agree with the author’s ideas. Even a well experienced snow boarder like you, don’t use the slang words “shredders” or anything else than that. You made a good point here, but not everyone know what you really mean here when you said “Teens all over the world know what I’m talking about.” Because of the culture differences and not everywhere have the environments for people to snow board or ski, I had some problem understanding what you were trying to say.
And the sentence “Terrain Park pass is not to instill good behavior in the ‘shredders’ and ‘free riders’, but to keep people who do not have the skills to negotiate the Terrain Park.” Second part of the sentence doesn’t really make sense, besides that you did a good job telling readers about your knowledge on mountain culture. That makes me believe what you say without a doubt.
Everything else seems very good.



Sean Hu